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Offline Fabo

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Contacts factual error
« on: March 19, 2009, 11:04:20 PM »
Hey guys, I just got mine books, and they are great!

However, I just found one factual error in book 2 - you see, somewhere towards beggining, Julio wears sunglsses, because he had accidentally put them into Listerine (whatever it is) - and later, he fixes the contacts in the engine, when Sally asks, whether he wore contacts, and he said he did not... Just to see what of a nitpicks your readers are ::whistle::
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Re: Contacts factual error
« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2009, 03:41:55 AM »
Wow!  :o :o

You might be right there. Never put the two together....
I guess we have to make up our mind before we go animated, huh?!  ;D

The Julio-contact-joke isn't our best work, so we'll probably go with Julio not wearing contacts....

It's amazing the stuff you guys find sometimes...  ::wave::


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Re: Contacts factual error
« Reply #2 on: March 20, 2009, 07:56:17 AM »
have to find my other two books they have gone MIA (any chance of two new ones?  ::whistle:: )
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Re: Contacts factual error
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2009, 05:34:27 PM »
Not bad! Both Fabo's find and Mike's response (some authors take any hint of an error very negatively, regardless if it's intended as critique or not).

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Re: Contacts factual error
« Reply #4 on: March 22, 2009, 03:29:20 AM »
To be honest Frank, I actually expected you to have filed this well before I noticed |:)\
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