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Re: New book! ...FINALLY!
« Reply #30 on: March 26, 2009, 05:09:00 PM »
Ill be going through the book looking for all these errors now Frank  ::rofl::
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Re: New book! ...FINALLY!
« Reply #31 on: March 26, 2009, 09:57:42 PM »
Quote from: Frank N. O. on March 26, 2009, 04:58:47 PM
Ok, I'd better get these notes posted before I forget them again.

Page 28, 1st strip, 1st frame, Chuck says "more" twice in a row.
Page 38, 1st strip, 1st frame, Julio's reply seems to be missing a "sure".

Page 41, 1st strip. It might not really be an error but when I hear someone describing something easy then they usually say "like a hot knife thrue butter" since normally cutting thrue butter isn't easy, at least not the kind of butter we got here, but as I said, it might not really be an error since sayings vary between the different cultures.

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Thanks, Frank!

Yes, page 28 definitely is an error! My girlfriend noticed that one too.  :-\
Page 38... Hm, no, I think it works without the "sure".
Page 41: You're right! I would have preferred that version! But I drew the characters so big in the first panel, that I didn't have any more space left to put the text! That happens quite often, actually, and then I have to cut down the text to fit it in...  ;D
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Re: New book! ...FINALLY!
« Reply #32 on: March 26, 2009, 10:19:23 PM »
Quote from: Stef on March 26, 2009, 09:57:42 PM
Thanks, Frank!

Yes, page 28 definitely is an error! My girlfriend noticed that one too.  :-\
Page 38... Hm, no, I think it works without the "sure".
Page 41: You're right! I would have preferred that version! But I drew the characters so big in the first panel, that I didn't have any more space left to put the text! That happens quite often, actually, and then I have to cut down the text to fit it in...  ;D
Glad to help, and glad you didn't take it the wrong way :)

About page 38 then I still think it would look more correct if Julio had said "I'm not sure if all the parts..."

Frank
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Re: New book! ...FINALLY!
« Reply #33 on: March 26, 2009, 10:25:25 PM »
Quote from: Frank N. O. on March 26, 2009, 10:19:23 PM

About page 38 then I still think it would look more correct if Julio had said "I'm not sure if all the parts..."

Frank

ZOUNDS! and CRIPES! You're right!!!  ::eek:: I still didn't see it, even after you put it under my nose! Well, no wonder I didn't see it while proofreading then...
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