Roost Air Lounge => Current Strip => Topic started by: Fabo on March 19, 2009, 11:04:20 PM
Title: Contacts factual error
Post by: Fabo on March 19, 2009, 11:04:20 PM
Hey guys, I just got mine books, and they are great!
However, I just found one factual error in book 2 - you see, somewhere towards beggining, Julio wears sunglsses, because he had accidentally put them into Listerine (whatever it is) - and later, he fixes the contacts in the engine, when Sally asks, whether he wore contacts, and he said he did not... Just to see what of a nitpicks your readers are ::whistle::
Title: Re: Contacts factual error
Post by: Mike on March 20, 2009, 03:41:55 AM
Wow! :o :o
You might be right there. Never put the two together.... I guess we have to make up our mind before we go animated, huh?! ;D
The Julio-contact-joke isn't our best work, so we'll probably go with Julio not wearing contacts....
It's amazing the stuff you guys find sometimes... ::wave::
Title: Re: Contacts factual error
Post by: Oddball on March 20, 2009, 07:56:17 AM
have to find my other two books they have gone MIA (any chance of two new ones? ::whistle:: )
Title: Re: Contacts factual error
Post by: Frank N. O. on March 21, 2009, 05:34:27 PM
Not bad! Both Fabo's find and Mike's response (some authors take any hint of an error very negatively, regardless if it's intended as critique or not).
Frank
Title: Re: Contacts factual error
Post by: Fabo on March 22, 2009, 03:29:20 AM
To be honest Frank, I actually expected you to have filed this well before I noticed |:)\